WALT: Write a narrative following the correct structure.
This is my book on the subject of a disaster that happened in Thailand when a soccer team got stuck in a cave.
My narrative
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https://www.storyjumper.com/book/read/82723695/Stuck-In-A-Cave
This is BRILLIANT, Brendon. I like how you used "Mrs Dowman" as the teacher. I also liked the addition on the Glow Worm cave picture on the front. You've used some really great "tell, don't show" sentences. Keep it up!
ReplyDeletein every book that I write I'm going to my last name in it like in THE WISH OF LOCKNESS RIVER " the Dowmans are going on a hloiday and the nutingtins break into there house".
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